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Signed Toris Laurinaitis

You smiled widely at the name. It was the sweet Lithuanian man. He was medium height with shoulder length brown hair and gorgeous blue eyes. You knew the man for a few years now and had grown to love him.

You grabbed a sheet of paper and scribbled your own note of the sheet.
I like you too Toris. Would you like to go back to the mainland tomorrow for a date with me?
Signed _______.


You folded the paper and slipped down the stairs to the boys quarters. You found the room that the Baltics shared and slid the sheet under the door, then you took off back to your own room.

You sat on the bed biting your nails. After giving up hope for a reply you heard a small knock on the door. When you went to open it there was no one there, only a small piece of paper with one word on it. Yes

*Time Skip*

You woke up early to get ready. After taking a shower you pulled on your cutest dress and did your makeup. You pulled on comfortable shoes and ran down the stairs to Toris' room. You knocked excitedly on the door and it was opened by Lithuania.

"Good morning _____." a small blush was covering his cheeks, and just to make it brighter you kissed him on the pink skin. He did indeed turn a darker red and stepped out of the room and took your hand.

He led you down the rest of the steps and out to the dock. There, you jumped into the motor boat and Toris took the steering wheel. Once docked at the mainland Toris took your hand and helped you out of the boat.

You moved your hand up to his bicep and cuddled next to him. He guided you down the road, pointing things out on occasion, until you were standing in front of a carnival. Toris turned and smiled at you.

"You like carnivals don't you?"
"Yes i love them!"

You walked to the ticket booth and bought two tickets and walked in. You walked through the stands and played a few games. You lost all the ones you tried, but Toris one you a stuffed dog at one station.

You were stuffing your face with cotton candy when you spotted the tall Ferris wheel at the center of the carnival. Toris saw it too and soon you were getting into a bright  blue car. You were smiling brightly when the ride started.

Toris was sitting across from you and looked extremely handsome in the twilight. He crawled over to your bench and sat next to you. The seat was tiny and you were pressed up against said man.

He took your hands and turned you to look at him. You were nearly to the top of the ride now and you could see the beautiful scenery behind his head.
"_____ there's something i need to tell you."
"Yes?"

"I love you _____." You let out a small gasp and put a hand on his cheek.
"I love you too Toris."

The distance between your lips closed and you were kissing. The sun was setting and you were bathed in a bright pink light at the top of the Ferris Wheel.

You never wanted to come down.    
Hetalia: :iconhimaruyaplz:
Story: me
Picture: not me
You: :iconsexylithuaniaplz:

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MetalBladez00940902 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2015
((I mentally fangirled AGAIN. Dude, the feels... OMG SO BEAUTIFUL!!!)) :iconmonkeyloveplz:
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KatarinaDreams Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015
the ferris wheel was perfect
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Etnata Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oy! This was soo adorable!
I'm mentally daiting this guy and his country.
And you uploaded this on my date of birth.
Prussia-like!
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ArtistInTraining012 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Student Artist
Awe he is so adorable
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Spot-The-Kitty Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I hate Ferris Wheels. I have a huge fear of falling and heights. Well... I like roller coasters. That's it.
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Theanimeangel Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014

I remember once I got to spend a night in the Ferris wheel on the tippy top. It was scary, but now that I think of it, It was fun. Plus I got donuts for breakfast /\-/\

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teamedward4ever1326 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013
No-no-no-no-no! I do want to come down! I don't like being up here for so long! I had a trumatic experience on the ferris wheal in California Adventure in Disney Land *shudders at the memory*
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Dogwoods-Roses Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I know what you mean. I freak out when I get stuck on a Ferris wheel too long. This one time I was stuck on one while a lightning storm came out of no where! I thought I'd be electrocuted!
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teamedward4ever1326 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014
Oh. My. Glob. That must have been terrifying.
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HetaliaLover266 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Me: *shaking like crazy* Mehhhhh.... mehhhhh..... (sounds like when PEWDIEPIE does tht) mehhhh..... mehhhh.....

Toris: Uhhh... are you okay ____?

Me: *doesn't respond, has gone pure white* Mehhhhh..... mehhhh..... mehhhhh.....

Toris: *giggle* You sound weird.

Me: *snaps to* Really?!

Toris: Really.

Me: *hugs*

(Ferris Wheel jolts)

Me: *jumps over a foot and hits head* OWWW!

Me irl if this actually happened...
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Raffelo Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014
Sooooo true xD
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HetaliaLover266 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yea how I would react in a nutshell
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VOCALOIDHakuYowane Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Student Writer
Classic Ferris wheel. Works every time.
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emmalynncat Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*silently freaks out*HOLY CRAP!!!!!PERFECT PLACE FOR THIS!!!!!!
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PrincessAeritha Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Tori-chan! I'm scared of heights, you know?
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MelodyofJustice Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Student General Artist
Join the club! I'd be more like "Don't look down, don't look down!" *gripping Toris for dear life*

Toris: *confused but cuddles back* What's wrong?

Me: *looks down* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! GET ME DOWN GET ME DOWN GET ME DOWN!!!! 
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PrincessAeritha Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I: I'll rescue you! *said levitating with closed eyes*
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MelodyofJustice Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Student General Artist
M: *jumps out and grabs her* AIYYEEEEE! And down now!!!! 
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PrincessAeritha Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I: *set you on the ground and came back to Toris*
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MelodyofJustice Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Student General Artist
M: *grateful* Thank you! 

Toris: *totally confused* What the...?
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PrincessAeritha Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I: No problem! *turned to Toris* Now, I need help with that engagement... Do you think Ivy-sama'll let me go?
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MelodyofJustice Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013  Student General Artist
Toris: *shrugs* Maybe. 

M: If you're good :P 
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xXHitsujiChanXx Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I am terrified of heights man! :scared: 
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teamedward4ever1326 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013
I am too, but for some reason I like ferris wheels, not the one in disney land though
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xXHitsujiChanXx Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Me too I like ferris wheels but rideing on one ---> Grey Kitten-Lmfao friendly 
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teamedward4ever1326 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013
cool
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xXHitsujiChanXx Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:icontotallyplz:
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teamedward4ever1326 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013
lol
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xXHitsujiChanXx Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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blackdiamond63 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I must love him a LOT because i have a fear of heights.
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bubblesvx1100531 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
same
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blackdiamond63 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i went to Chicago to visit my dad and we all went to the Willis tower and I went into the overhanging glass box and oh my gosh THE BUILDING WAS SWAYING! i died out there
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WorldOfMuffins Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013
>~< I DO WANNA COME DOWN!
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TurtleAttacksTomato Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
LIET!!!!
WHY U SO KAWAII!!!???
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gothicanimelover5309 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
this story is so sweet i'm getting a cavity
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FateGrav Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
My favorites page is about to blow up because of these stories...
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bubblesvx1100531 Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
hehe~
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NinjaNyanKat Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
That picture is going to be the death of me *major nosebleed*
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deathnotefangirl99 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awww this is so cute
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Bashiix12 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Student General Artist
Liet is so cuuute. x3
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Fall-Like-Angels Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I wish this could happen to me, but heights are not my best friend. I'd be curled up in a scared ball afraid to move. ^^
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MizuVargas Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Student Writer
I'm scared of heights:fear:
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Natural-Causes3141 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013
<333
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HElCHOU Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconitssofluffyplz:
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myheartwillbreak Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Student Writer
:iconitssofluffyplz:
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Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
Awww so cute >3
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sarpndo Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012
aww, :iconitssofluffyplz:
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AskZerikaAkashiya Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Student General Artist
(roller coasters are better...)
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bubblesvx1100531 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i agree with you there
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AskZerikaAkashiya Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Student General Artist
(yeeeeeeees.)
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