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Sup all of my readers? I've loved all the feedback I've gotten from you guys and i wanted to say thanks. Now onto this story. This is a preveiw of a series and it may be kind of long. i recommend that you watch Hetaoni before reading this series so you understand what's going on. The whole thing will be for your POV. I'm going to use a lot of the dialogue from the game along with some of my own Don't hesitate to ask me any questions you have.
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A deserted house in a mountain.
About three hours on foot form the world summit place.
No one knows how long it has been there or who used to live in it
Rumors had it that it was haunted.


"Ve~It's really here" The cute Italian cheered. Though his voice was happy he seemed sort of dejected at the moment. His hazel eyes were open and downcast. You looked at him and he glanced into your (e/c) eyes and then flitted his away.

"I thought it was just a rumor...I never thought we would actually find it." The Japanese man was looking up at the brick house in front of your group. The building was tall, at least four stories, and was made of white bricks and an almost orange roof.

There was only a white door and a tall window to greet you and you could see two wings off to either side with windows. It would have been rather normal except that the windows of the first floor were all bared shut with metal cages.

The sight made you slightly nervous but you wouldn't let the other countries know you were scared.
"It has such a desolate feel..not bad," of course the red eyed man would approve of such a place. He was quite strange with his white hair and his snake-like laugh. His younger brother piped up then

"I don't think it's very interesting though," he looked slightly nervous, his eyes shifted around as if looking for an escape. You found it amusing that the oh-so-string nation was scared of a little house.

"Me neither...Can't we just look at it from the outside and then go back?" Oh so Japan was nervous too? How strange.
"Awww, after all the trouble we had to find it? C'mon let's just go in for a little while." And Italy was acting brave? What was the world coming to? He seemed to be uncharacteristically depressed and you hadn't seen him smile since the meeting earlier that day.

You figured it was about time you spoke up.
"I'm with Italy. Let's just go in for a minute. We can always come back out if you guys are so scared." Both Germany and Japan threw you angry glares for calling them cowards.

"Fine! I guess I'll go in. If those rumors are true you'll need some protection anyway."
"Sure Germany, whatever makes you feel better." You skipped over to Italy and took his hand.
"Come on guys. I'm a woman and i have more balls than you do." You stuck out your tongue trying to goad them on.

"Nein! The awesome Prussia is way cooler than you Czech!"
"Prove it loser!"

You pulled Italy along with you as you opened the door. You noticed Italy's blush out of the corner of your eye and you smiled. You thought the man was adorable and had a small crush on him. Before you walked into the house you turned to the nation and kissed him on the cheek. He looked genuinely surprised and you giggled.

You stepped into the house and into your fate once again.
preview of the series that will probably be quite long (i'll try to cut it down as much as i can) but i hope it will be a good one.:iconyayitalyplz:

This has been a project i've been thinking of for a long time and i'm finally starting :iconclapplz:

Tell me if you like it and want me to continue :iconpervyitalyplz:

Hetalia: :iconhimaruyaplz:
Hetaoni: not really sure
story: me
picture: someone who isn't me
you: :iconsexyitaly2plz:

part 1: [link]
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BunnyUtonium Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Student General Artist
what do you mean again?!!!
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bubblesvx1100531 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
gotta keep reading~
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BunnyUtonium Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Student General Artist
ok scared
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HetaliaLillian Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013
But I don't want to die over and over and over and over and over
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CatGwmen Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012
I'm already on the edge of my seat!! I read this and wondered what HetaOni was.
Now, I've watched the videos at least three times already, still crying at parts, and changed my phone wallpapers to HetaOni. I've watched HetaOni vids and even looked up some Fan Art. Hell, I've even had a dream of it!!
After reading part one, i'm literally at the edge of my seat, clutching my plushie close to me XD

You HAVE to continue. EVERYTHING. Make it long XD LOL.
This is going to be freaking awesome!! >w< Ahh!! I'm all twitchy now XDD
Anyways, THANK YOU for starting this!! :icondragonhugplz:
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bubblesvx1100531 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yeah! i'm glad i got more people hooked on it. It's taken me two hours so far to write the second part (i'm only half way done) it's alot harder than you would think trying to figure out parts of that game. It /should/ be up by one tonight
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CatGwmen Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012
>_< Dude part two was AWESOME!!
I'm literally like this when it comes to HetaOni and your stories :iconcannotevenplz:
You have like, NO idea how bad I'm fangirling LOL
Keep up the great work!! >w<
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bubblesvx1100531 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
lol i'm glad you like them so much and i will :D
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CatGwmen Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012
I'm glad you showed me some more awesome reasons to love Hetalia XDD

And Yay~! >w< Totally excited here haha ^w^
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Lady-Brazil Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I can't wait for more :) i'll feel so bad for italy when the reader keeps dying though (If she does)
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bubblesvx1100531 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
well she has in past time loops of course :P i feel bad for him in general
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Lady-Brazil Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yeah poor italy when he died for the first time i cried so much!
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bubblesvx1100531 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
the ending, where it stopped really, made me so angry. I screamed in rage and rolled off my bed. (my friend was over at the time and thought i went crazy)
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Lady-Brazil Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I forgot the ending it's been a while, how did it go again ^^'
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bubblesvx1100531 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
here i'll message you (don't want any spoilers)
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MagicCanbeFound Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
HetaOni? I've heard of it but never seen it...what is it?
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bubblesvx1100531 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
it's a game where the hetalia characters go into a mansion and then get trapped here's a like to watch it [link]
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MagicCanbeFound Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, shlank you
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Silvia-x-Gaara Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012
Awesome~! Can't wait for more^^
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animechick7 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012
I screamed and cry playing/watching hetaoni i fill like im going 2 start crying again
plz continue
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bubblesvx1100531 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i shall :)
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animechick7 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012
yay!!
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CrystalRainbow8 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
*sniffle* *grabs tissues for future use* :icontissuesplz:
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bubblesvx1100531 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
good idea
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AnnaMay15 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh please continue! I love HetaOni reader inserts! Italy deserves some attention after all he has been through. You have done a good job on this preview!
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bubblesvx1100531 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks and i agree there are not enough Italy or Hetaoni reader inserts
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NostaligicDreamer Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yay I belong to italy! Anyway.... Continue!!! I love HetaOni!
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bubblesvx1100531 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
alright :D and yes you do
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NostaligicDreamer Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Double yes!!!! -fist pumps-
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